Thursday, September 10, 2009

Hunting Patrol trail!


Where we hunt!
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179 comments:

  1. JennaSeptember 10, 2009 at 3:02 PM

    *swiftly kills Falcon by hooking it with claw and slicing throat!*

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  2. WhistleSeptember 11, 2009 at 5:20 PM

    [Tracks down a few plump chipmunks and a finch and pads back to camp with a mouthful of prey]

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  3. JennaSeptember 13, 2009 at 9:02 AM

    *tracks down a finch, and takes it back to camp for the elders*

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  4. BristolSeptember 18, 2009 at 7:49 PM

    Rainfeather slipped into the area, scenting the air. She immediately dropped into the hunter's crouch, stalking a rabbit. She pounced and killed it swiftly, then took it back to camp.

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  5. RainStreamNovember 30, 2009 at 12:08 PM

    *sniffs air* Swiftly Kills Three Mice and Squirrel, Trots Back To Camp.

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  6. RainStreamNovember 30, 2009 at 12:40 PM

    Sees A Mouse Scurrying Off, Quickly Pounces , Kills In One Swipe Of A Paw.*sniffs air* Sees BlackBird, BItes On Neck, KIlls Swiftly And Silently. Is Happy With Catch, For Now, Goes Back To Camp.

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  7. RainStreamNovember 30, 2009 at 2:29 PM

    Hears Stream, Shakes Head, Focuses On Hunt, Catches Four Mice Easily, sniffs air,she sees a crow ten tail lenghts away, crouches, Pounces, kills and takes back to camp.

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  8. RainStreamDecember 1, 2009 at 3:30 PM

    Crouches into Hunters Crouch. Sees Vole, Gets Ready To pounce, When KIts Come Up From Behind And Squeal With Exitement, Scares Vole Away, Turns Around, Scolds Kits While Going Back To Nursery.

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  9. RainStreamDecember 1, 2009 at 3:40 PM

    Looks Up From Prey, Only To See A Mouse Scuttling Past, Picks Up And Kills Swiftly. Decides To Go Back To Camp With Three Mice, A Vole, A Crow, And A Chipmunk.= )

    ~RainStream

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  10. RainStreamDecember 2, 2009 at 3:21 PM

    *sniffs air* Kits See And Do The Same, THen Out Of NoWhere A Vole Come Out The Shadows Before Rain Stream Could Do Anything Frost Kit POunces Perfectly, And Lands Right Beside it, Before It Could Run She Sliced Its Throught With Her Claw. PIcks It Up Joyfully, And Drops At Mothers PAws. Rain Stream Pressed Her Muzzle Against Her KIts, And Congratulated Her. Then She Decided She Would Go Back To Camp. She Held Her Daughters Tail IN Her Tail, And Let The Boys IN Front Gently Nudging THem When THey Slowed.

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  11. JennaDecember 4, 2009 at 3:24 PM

    *pads down the trail with Rainstream, both cats alert for prey.*

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  12. JennaDecember 4, 2009 at 3:27 PM

    *a rabbit bounds in front of the pair, its white tail dissapearing in front of them. They race after it, their eyes sparkling. Thunderstar streaks past Rainstream, her fur flowing. She leaps, gets a clawful of rabbit, a bites down hard. Rainstream races over and dispatches it. They bury the rabbit and pad away.*

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  13. Rain StreamDecember 4, 2009 at 3:27 PM

    *sniffs air* sees plump chipmunk, swiftly kills, picks up, then spots crow, quickly jumps on, slices with claw. stands up happy with catch.

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  14. JennaDecember 4, 2009 at 3:31 PM

    *Thunderstar pads over. "Good catch!" she congradulated Rainstream.

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  15. Rain StreamDecember 5, 2009 at 9:19 AM

    Thank You Thunder Star!!! *looks away kinda embarressed at leaders praise* Then burys them and keeps hunting.

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  16. Rain StreamDecember 5, 2009 at 11:29 AM

    Rain stream slithered through the undergrowth looking for prey. she had left snow kit in the nursery, so she wouldnt scare off the prey. *sniffs air* mouse and squirrel, she saw the squirrel, and pounced the squirrel was dead instantly, she then saw the mice they were both nibbling on nuts. She couldnt possibly kill both, could she. she pounced for one, and as she killed, the other one fled, it was fast, but rain stream was faster, she caught up with the mouse and sliced it with one claw. she trotted back to camp with quite a bit of prey.

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  17. Rain StreamDecember 5, 2009 at 4:29 PM

    *sniffs air* vole, she saw it almost instantly and she pounced for it and she killed it with a swipe of a paw. goes back to camp.

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  18. Storm PawDecember 9, 2009 at 2:51 PM

    storm paw walked beside his mentor, One Cloud, he was hunting for lily kit. " what do you smell Storm Paw??" He lifted his nose and sniffed he could smell squirrel,mouse,and crow. he meowed " a lot!" One Cloud Said "OK" Storm Paw Saw the dove, not crow, he pounced and quickly made the kill. He thought to himself this would be perfect to give her!! he scurried off to camp, leaving One Cloud Behind.

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  19. Pebble PawDecember 17, 2009 at 8:02 PM

    'sniffs air' "i smell vole."

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  20. JennaDecember 17, 2009 at 8:03 PM

    *Falcontail and Pebblepaw pad over, and scent the air.* "Well, scent any-" *His words were cut off as a mouse darted in front of him. He leaped strongly ahead, and pounced, bringing it down with his paw.* "Want Some?" he asked Pebblepaw.

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  21. Pebble PawDecember 17, 2009 at 8:04 PM

    sees vole. jumps right beside vole, kills with swipe of a paw. picks up in mouth.'holds in mouth'

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  22. Pebble PawDecember 17, 2009 at 8:05 PM

    "im ok. but thank you," says through voles fur. drops vole. "no thanks. im not hungry."

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  23. JennaDecember 17, 2009 at 8:06 PM

    "Good Catch!" he congradulated Pebblepaw, his eyes gleaming with triumph.

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  24. JennaDecember 17, 2009 at 8:06 PM

    "Oh." drops prey. "Okay. What do you want to do now?"

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  25. Pebble PawDecember 17, 2009 at 8:09 PM

    "we probabaly should be getting back. ill go put this in the fresh kill pile. you wanna come?" pebble paw stood up to leave and questioned "are you ok, falcon tail???"

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  26. Pebble PawDecember 17, 2009 at 8:10 PM

    sits back down waiting for reply. tail twitching curiously.

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  27. JennaDecember 17, 2009 at 8:11 PM

    "Yeah. I'm fine." he shrugs sadly.

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  28. Pebble PawDecember 17, 2009 at 8:13 PM

    "no your not. tell me, please, i can keep secrets."

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  29. Pebble PawDecember 17, 2009 at 8:16 PM

    "well ok im just gonna wait here until you tell me whats wrong.... even if its all night." she says stubbornly.

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  30. JennaDecember 17, 2009 at 8:16 PM

    "Well, " he meowed. "Its kinda long, but here it is. I was born in secret, Thunderstar is my mother, she lied to us, me and my siblings, and told us she found us in the forest. We believed her, learned she was lying, got over it, I got rejected by Scarletleaf- she and Foxleg are almost mates, and I got rejected by Blossomfur too. And now- I'm sure its gonna happen with you too." his eyes get dark, and he stares sadly at her.

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  31. JennaDecember 17, 2009 at 8:17 PM

    Oh- my siblings are Angelmoon, Sunstorm, Honeydew, and Moonspirit.

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  32. Pebble PawDecember 17, 2009 at 8:19 PM

    "well i think your cute, but so is smoke paw. and now im stuck in between two great guys. and thunder star was lying to you to protect you. it was a smart decision." pebble paw meowed.

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  33. JennaDecember 17, 2009 at 8:21 PM

    "Well- I guess it was smart. Oh- and I never know you'll love me the way you do Smokepaw, so, yeah. Do you like me?"

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  34. Smoke PawDecember 17, 2009 at 8:26 PM

    smoke paw came out of the bushes with hurt and pain in his eyes. he said "i knew it when you agreed to go hunting with him, i just didnt believe it. i understand pebble paw, dont worry ill move on, i hope. he is stronger, handesomer, and just plain better mate than i would have been. well i guess this is good bye. bye pebble paw." turns around runs off. tail dissapears through bushes.

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  35. Pebble PawDecember 17, 2009 at 8:27 PM

    "no smoke paw, wait! you dont understand, you have it all wrong i love both of you!! please just come back!" she hollered but it was to late smoke paw was gone by then.

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  36. JennaDecember 17, 2009 at 8:27 PM

    *Falcontail stared at the bushes where Smokepaw dissapeared. He saw Pebblepaw- her face in anguish.* "Pebblepaw- im- im- im sorry. Smokepaw hates me now! Its just- hard! No one will ever love me! Never! Everyone hates me!" he wails.

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  37. Pebble PawDecember 17, 2009 at 8:28 PM

    'turns to'" of course i like you, i love you, but i love smoke paw too. which is difficult."

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  38. JennaDecember 17, 2009 at 8:29 PM

    *eyes water* "Well, we both need you to choose. This is too hard- for both me and Smokepaw- and for you."

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  39. Pebble PawDecember 17, 2009 at 8:31 PM

    " if only i hadnt come here. this never would have happened, its all my fault, not yours. and theres only one way to fix it. and im gonna do it, so i wont make all the clan sad or mad. and i do love you. and smoke paw.

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  40. JennaDecember 17, 2009 at 8:32 PM

    *stands up* "What are you going to do? Whoever you choose- i'll always love you." *licks her head softly.* "If you choose Smokepaw- I will be sad, but i'll be happy for you."

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  41. Pebble PawDecember 17, 2009 at 8:32 PM

    "thats why im leaving. its not fair for i to love you both and can only choose one of you. and not fair to you or smoke paw that only one of you has me when your both in love with me."

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  42. JennaDecember 17, 2009 at 8:33 PM

    " NO! YOU ARE NOT LEAVING!" *he starts wailing* " YOU CANT! I'LL DIE! I NEED TO AT LEAST SEE YOU WITH HIM!"

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  43. Pebble PawDecember 17, 2009 at 8:36 PM

    'looks in eyes' "im sorry just dont forget i do lovve you, but i also love somebody else too." "licks cheek and disapears through bushes, eyes start to water while running. finally stops running and just stops, sits down, falls asleep, in the middle of a unknown territory.'

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  44. JennaDecember 17, 2009 at 8:38 PM

    *follows scent, then collapses. He couldn't. His heavy heart dragged him down so far, he thought he was falling.* He calls her name weakly. "Pebblepaw- Pebblepa- w-....."

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  45. Pebble PawDecember 17, 2009 at 8:38 PM

    yells "tell smoke paw i love him too!! and that i said good bye!!!" then forest falls silent

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  46. Smoke PawDecember 17, 2009 at 8:40 PM

    Smoke Paw walked up behind Falcon Tail and demands "where is she? i need her, i heard yelling in camp i thought she might be in trouble.'looks at' o no! what happened?? where is she?" ' water fills eyes'

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  47. JennaDecember 17, 2009 at 8:42 PM

    *Falcontail opened his eyes, and saw a black cat. He thought it was Pebblepaw. "Pebblepaw? Is that you?" he asked weakly, yet boldly.

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  48. Smoke PawDecember 17, 2009 at 8:44 PM

    "she, she cant bb ee dead. i-s she?" yowls in pain, "i cant live with out her. i love her, even if she did love someone else, i loved her. i would die for her, i might as well die if shes not by my side or at least in my sight!" ' sobs '

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  49. JennaDecember 17, 2009 at 8:45 PM

    "what? Smokepaw? She ran that way, I was following her scent, and I fainted."

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  50. Smoke PawDecember 17, 2009 at 8:47 PM

    Smoke Paw collapsed. he was still sobbing, but his legs were to weak to hold his weight. he hit his head pretty hard when he fell and was left unconcious.

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  51. JennaDecember 17, 2009 at 8:48 PM

    *yowls* " Pebblepaw! Where are you!" *yowls over and over, and finally gives in on the fifth try.*

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  52. Smoke PawDecember 17, 2009 at 8:49 PM

    breathes shallow and slow breathes. is in dream sees pebble paw meows "thank star clan shes safe." then realizes is in dream. asks " did i join star cllan?" a voice answers "no young one,its not your time yet, we show you she safe that it."

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  53. JennaDecember 17, 2009 at 8:51 PM

    Falcontail gasps, then collapses so hard, he felt like a rock. He got knocked out, and lay there, slowly getting sick to his stomach.

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  54. Smoke PawDecember 17, 2009 at 8:52 PM

    wakes up, jumps to feet, runs into forest in search of pebble paw. yowls "shes safe! shes alive! thank star clan!" keeps running at full speed till scent starts to twist and turn.

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  55. JennaDecember 17, 2009 at 8:53 PM

    I G2G!!! BYEEE!!!!

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  56. Smoke PawDecember 17, 2009 at 8:55 PM

    'sniffs air' sees faint black body, stomach slowly rising up and down. Yowls "pebble paw!" runs up to. lays down beside, hears whispers "smoke paw? why are you here?" he didnt reply he didnt need to she curled up closer to his body for warmth, lays down beside pebble paw to keep warm.

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  57. Smoke PawDecember 17, 2009 at 8:58 PM

    "pebble paw i gotta pick you up, im taking you back to camp." she mutters "ok" then he carefully puts her on his back and runs as fast as he can without dropping her to camp.

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  58. Rain StreamDecember 18, 2009 at 9:36 AM

    "so why did you want to come hunting? the fresh kill piles very full." rain stream asked. he looked in her eyes and meowed "cause i like you. your fun, and pretty, and i saw that you wanted a mate too." she was shocked she goes "well, ya but i already have kits, wouldnt that bother you any? and im in the nursery, one of my kits just died." he saw the pain flood into her eyes and said "im so sorry. i didnt mean to bring it up. and no ur kits wouldn't bother me. i love kits." she felt the pain and sadness go away from her face and purred "ok. but, i need to tell thunder star, that im moving into the warriors den." she got up and walked away, dirt pelt followed more slowly.

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  59. Smoke PawDecember 18, 2009 at 8:48 PM

    'sniffs air' looks at golden paw out of the corner of his eye, smiles.

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  60. Smoke PawDecember 18, 2009 at 8:49 PM

    he sees a plump vole, and springs, swiftly kills by bite on the neck.

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  61. JennaDecember 18, 2009 at 8:50 PM

    *Goldenpaw* Tracks down a few squirrels, and waits. Finally, an owl swoops down to the squirrels, and she springs onto the owls back, and bites his neck. They fall to the ground, her prey three squirrels and an owl. She smiles at Smokecloud.

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  62. smoke pawDecember 18, 2009 at 8:51 PM

    he sees a robin, about ten fox lenghts away, he takes a mighty leap and lands right behind he bird. the bird took off, but smoke paw jumped up on his hind legs and caught it.

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  63. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 8:52 PM

    he meows "Great Catch!!!!!" he smiles back.

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  64. JennaDecember 18, 2009 at 8:53 PM

    *Goldenpaw* "Err... Smokecloud? Adderpaw said that you only like me beacause i'm too scared and wimpy to fend for myself! Is that true?" *cries*

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  65. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 8:54 PM

    he said "hey golden paw?? can i ask you a question???"

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  66. JennaDecember 18, 2009 at 8:55 PM

    *Goldenpaw* "Sure." *sniffs thenm weeps quietly.*

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  67. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 8:56 PM

    "no! adder paw?? hes gonna get it. i like you because your fun, sweet, loving, pretty, and bold. and a lot more."

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  68. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 8:56 PM

    "do you like me as much as i like you???"

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  69. JennaDecember 18, 2009 at 8:57 PM

    *Goldenpaw* smiles, then mews, "Really!? You aren't just saying that? Thanks!" *stretches up, and licks nose*

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  70. JennaDecember 18, 2009 at 8:58 PM

    *Goldenpaw* "Yes! I I--- I love you Smokecloud. And when I am a warrior, which is soon, I will become your mate for sure!"

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  71. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 8:58 PM

    he looks away hoping he wasn't moving to fast.

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  72. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 9:00 PM

    smiles "great, i love you too golden paw. i love you with more than star clan its self. i love you, i would give my life for you, golden paw."

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  73. JennaDecember 18, 2009 at 9:00 PM

    *Goldenpaw* "Smokecloud? Are you okay?" *gazes caustiously at him*

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  74. JennaDecember 18, 2009 at 9:01 PM

    *Goldenpaw* "Sorry. Its just- most people just assume I don't like anyone- that i'm just a kit."

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  75. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 9:01 PM

    'runs up to her and licks her fore head in affection'

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  76. JennaDecember 18, 2009 at 9:02 PM

    *Goldenpaw* blinks, then curls up at his feet.

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  77. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 9:02 PM

    "well i assume your going to be a great mate in the near future."

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  78. JennaDecember 18, 2009 at 9:03 PM

    *Goldenpaw* "Really!? You think so?"

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  79. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 9:04 PM

    He finally meowed "we better get going or the clan are going to start worrying about us."

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  80. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 9:05 PM

    "i dont think so....... i know so."

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  81. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 9:06 PM

    "and i cant wait until i see that adder paw. hes gonna get a mouth full."

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  82. JennaDecember 18, 2009 at 9:06 PM

    *Goldenpaw* "Okay, lets go.." *freezes as Adderpaw comes out of the brambles, his eyes glinted.

    *Adderpaw* "Well, future mates here.. hmm..." *circles the two cats.*

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  83. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 9:08 PM

    slowly gets up, helps golden paw to her feet, helps carry food to camp clearing.

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  84. JennaDecember 18, 2009 at 9:09 PM

    *Adderpaw* blocks Smokecloud, snarling. You think you can just leave? With me standing here?"

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  85. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 9:09 PM

    "hey adder paw! guess what! im a warrior now, and your still not!!!"

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  86. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 9:10 PM

    "thats what i was thinking, puny kit."

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  87. JennaDecember 18, 2009 at 9:10 PM

    *Adderpaw* "Well, that doen't matter. I'm always watching you two." *dashes away, laughing.*

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  88. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 9:11 PM

    Snarls showing teeth "dont think your gonna win this fight adder paw, cause your not!"

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  89. JennaDecember 18, 2009 at 9:11 PM

    *Goldenpaw* shivering, then mews, "Smokecloud, what if he kills us? Or worse? Waits to kill our kits!" *shivers*

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  90. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 9:12 PM

    "ill be right back." dashes after adder paw,catches up with.

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  91. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 9:13 PM

    "i wont let that happen, remember i will give my life for you, that includes our kits also."

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  92. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 9:14 PM

    "adder paw! its one thing when you insult me, but its a whole different thing when you insult my mate!"

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  93. JennaDecember 18, 2009 at 9:15 PM

    *Goldenpaw* *wails for Smokecloud.*

    *Adderpaw* turns, and sees that Smokecloud is chasing him. He growls, the whips around. "Well Well Well. Look who left Goldenpaw, all alone. Oh- she'll thank you for that, tiny piece of fox-dung!"

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  94. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 9:16 PM

    " now that im a warrior you supposed to obey me, but i can see thats not gonna happen, so, im gonna do the right thing and back off, cause we are not supposed to fight clan mates, but i will if i keep hearing your big mouth talking about other cats, because your all sad and lonely!!!"

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  95. JennaDecember 18, 2009 at 9:17 PM

    *Adderpaw* "Mates? HA! Don't make me laugh! Mates! Gosh, you really think she likes you? Well, you guessed wrong! She loves me!"

    *Goldenpaw* "Adderpaw! Don't tell him lies!" *her eyes become mad, as she glares at Adderpaw. "Smokecloud, please don't believe him! Please!"

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  96. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 9:18 PM

    "Dont forget ill fight you, here, now, i dont care but dont insult my mate you mouse-brain!"

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  97. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 9:19 PM

    "im not, hes always been a jealous kit!! i cant believe they actually changed your name!"

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  98. JennaDecember 18, 2009 at 9:21 PM

    *Goldenpaw* *cries loudly, then collapses. She lays there, crying.*

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  99. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 9:21 PM

    'unsheathes claws' snarls "i have the whole eagle clan on my side, who do you have?? your imaginary friend and you??"

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  100. JennaDecember 18, 2009 at 9:22 PM

    *Adderpaw* snickers, then laughs, "Look at the tiny kit! Shes crying! Oh Boo Hoo!"

    *Goldenpaw* cries harder, her eyes turning gray from all the tears.

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  101. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 9:22 PM

    'runs over to, helps up.'

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  102. JennaDecember 18, 2009 at 9:22 PM

    *Adderpaw* I have sources. My mother, for one. She sides with me.

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  103. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 9:24 PM

    "shut- up adder paw!!!!!! its not her fault your being mean, i bet you wish you could cry too. you just dont have any body to tell ur problems to."

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  104. JennaDecember 18, 2009 at 9:25 PM

    *Adderpaw* You shut up! *dashes to camp, faster than a mad hare.*

    *Goldenpaw* cries herself to sleep, and breathes normally.

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  105. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 9:26 PM

    storm heart and frost leap came out from under the bushes, they saw adder paw and snarled at him. frost leap and storm heart took golden paw and held her up while Smoke Cloud went to face adder paw.

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  106. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 9:27 PM

    "fox dung!!!!!!!! will you gies take her to camp, carefully? i need to hurt him." runs after at full speed.

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  107. JennaDecember 18, 2009 at 9:28 PM

    *Goldenpaw* wakes up, then mews, "Smokecloud? Where are you, before wincing, my stomach hurts!"

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  108. JennaDecember 18, 2009 at 9:28 PM

    *Goldenpaw* winces again, and pants. She became normal after a while.

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  109. JennaDecember 18, 2009 at 9:30 PM

    *Goldenpaw* crawls to a holly bush, and lays down, burning up. She feels a hard kick in her belly, than gasps: "Kits? NO! Not now! I'm only an apprentice! NO!!!"

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  110. JennaDecember 18, 2009 at 9:32 PM

    *Goldenpaw* breathing becomes fast, and shallow, but also loud. She was too young to give birth. She wiced, and thrashed. Then, a kit slid out, followede by two more, then a final one. She lay there, not dead, but shocked. She had just had kits, as a apprentice.

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  111. JennaDecember 18, 2009 at 9:35 PM

    *Goldenpaw* mews weakly, four? thank starclan their beautiful, but I can't mother them! I'm too young!"

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  112. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 9:36 PM

    " Smoke Cloud ran up to her he spotted her tail under a bush. he slid under there with her then his face became blank. he meowed "these are not my kits, these are are adder paws arent they???"

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  113. JennaDecember 18, 2009 at 9:37 PM

    *Goldenpaw* shakes off. These were her and Smokeclouds kits, and she would potect them with her life. She licked them- one black tom, one gray and white she-cat, one light brown tom, and one pale grayu she-cat. She groomed them carefully.

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  114. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 9:38 PM

    Smoke Cloud stared at the kits and turned to GoldenPaw "you mated with adder paw????"

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  115. JennaDecember 18, 2009 at 9:38 PM

    *Goldenpaw* "What? No! Of couse not-" then was cut off, by her cramps.

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  116. JennaDecember 18, 2009 at 9:39 PM

    *Goldenpaw* pants- "These-are your-kits, before falling asleep. One kit- the black tom, wriggled over to Smokecloud, and gazed up at him from wide green eyes.

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  117. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 9:39 PM

    "wait! these are my kits!?? they cant be." his frustarted stare turned to a loving stare.

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  118. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 9:41 PM

    Smoke Cloud said "we cant take them back to camp, we are breaking the warrior code just by keeping them." he looked at the black tom that looked just like him.

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  119. JennaDecember 18, 2009 at 9:42 PM

    *Goldenpaw* can I name the black tom Crowkit? And the gray and white one Shinekit-" broke off with a purr, then turns to Adderpaw. We should stay here. For a while. They can't travel- not yet.

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  120. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 9:42 PM

    He picked up the black tom and pu it by Golden Paws Chest.

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  121. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 9:43 PM

    "adder paw??????"

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  122. JennaDecember 18, 2009 at 9:45 PM

    *Goldenpaw* licks the black toms head, before gazing up at Smokecloud. She had both love and pain in her eyes. "I'm just an apprentice! This isn't right! I will give myself a warrior name! Goldenheart!" *eyes cloud, then she looks at Smokecloud. She moves the kits back, with her right by them. She nods at the space, then at Smokepaw. "Please lay down. I'm cold. Please."

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  123. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 9:45 PM

    "of course i love those names!"

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  124. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 9:47 PM

    "ok." curls up around mate.keeps warm, thinks of names for other two kits while mate sleeps.

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  125. JennaDecember 18, 2009 at 9:47 PM

    *Goldenpaw* "What? Adderpaw whe-" cuts off as a gray blur flashes towards the kits. She crouches over them, accepting the blow to her flank, she hoveres over the kits, with blood matting her flank- Adderpaw had slashed her flank.

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  126. JennaDecember 18, 2009 at 9:48 PM

    *Adderpaw* Haha! Victory is mine-" falls to the ground, dead. Falcontail and Pebblepaw stand above him, hissing. Falcontail had killed Adderpaw.

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  127. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 9:50 PM

    slowly and carefully gets up to hunt. sniffing air to make sure no patrols see him.

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  128. JennaDecember 18, 2009 at 9:51 PM

    *Falcontail* "Pebblepaw, we can't tell anyone. Someone messes with kits- I turn to a monster. Kits are harmless- who would want to kill them? I had to slay him- i'm sorry- if anyone cared."

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  129. JennaDecember 18, 2009 at 9:52 PM

    Hey, G2G! My dad is turning to a monster! Bye!

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  130. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 9:52 PM

    sniffs air adder paw!!!! runs as fast as can to mate and kits

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  131. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 9:53 PM

    bye!!!

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  132. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 9:56 PM

    hits falcon tail at full speed, falcon tail falls to one side, Smoke Cloud hisses " stay away from my family!!!!" pebble paw tried tackling hin from one side but Smoke Cloud was to strong he stood in front of golden paw and his kits.

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  133. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 10:00 PM

    Smoke Cloud meowed a little calmer "you can tell the clan we are not going back until they accept what we have done, and our kits if they dont accept us, then as soon as the kits are old enough were leaving for good. tell mom i love her.now please go."

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  134. Smoke CloudDecember 18, 2009 at 10:11 PM

    Smoke Cloud laid around his kits they were all fast asleep.they had snuggled deep in his fur to keep warmer. he somehow fell asleep, and awoke to find shine kit and mud kit biting his tail, and comet kit and crow kit tugging at one of his hind legs. he meowed "ok ok ok! food it is!"

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  135. JennaDecember 19, 2009 at 7:40 AM

    *Goldenheart* So the black tom is Crowkit, The gray and white she-cat is Shinekit, and The light brown tom is Mudkit, and Cometkit is the pale gray she-cat? Cool with me!

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  136. Smoke CloudDecember 19, 2009 at 7:49 AM

    I believe so, and now Falcon Tail and Pebble Paw know where we are. We Shoud Probabaly Move When The Kits Can.

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  137. Smoke CloudDecember 19, 2009 at 7:51 AM

    "ill go hunting, you need the meat. and the kits need milk, its still winter, and black cough is still possible."

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  138. Smoke CloudDecember 19, 2009 at 7:57 AM

    Smoke Cloud sees a scrawny shrew, he easily finishes it off, he takes it back to his mate.

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  139. JennaDecember 19, 2009 at 7:59 AM

    *Goldenheart* "I changed my name. It's Goldenheart." (i added the kits, scroll down!)

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  140. Smoke CloudDecember 19, 2009 at 8:05 AM

    "they are beautiful golden heart, and so are you." he purred when he looked at his kits.

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  141. Smoke CloudDecember 19, 2009 at 8:20 AM

    he sits down by golden heart, he starts to lick shine kit clean.

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  142. JennaDecember 19, 2009 at 8:25 AM

    *Goldenheart* gently licks Mudkit, then starts on Cometkit and Crowkit. Shinekit reached up to Smokecloud with a tiny paw, and dabbed it on his nose. She giggled, the whispered, "I love you daddy."

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  143. Smoke CloudDecember 19, 2009 at 8:33 AM

    Smoke Cloud smiled and bent his head to shine kit and purred "i love you too, shine kit." then he looks at his other kits and meowed "i love all of you." then went back to grooming.

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  144. JennaDecember 19, 2009 at 8:38 AM

    *kits* "We love you!" *then leaps at Smokecloud, burying him in a mass of four kits.*

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  145. JennaDecember 19, 2009 at 8:40 AM

    *Goldenheart* "Wait... I haer a patrol!"

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  146. Smoke CloudDecember 19, 2009 at 8:45 AM

    "i do too!"gets up, come on we have to hide you. pushes golden heart and kits even deeper in holly bush. he meowed "ill take care of this." he unsheathes his claws.

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  147. Dirt PeltDecember 19, 2009 at 8:47 AM

    'sniffs air'"i can smell them, but its faint. has to be at least a day old."

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  148. JennaDecember 19, 2009 at 8:47 AM

    *Falcontail* "Hey! Don't forget I'm still here! No fighting!"

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  149. JennaDecember 19, 2009 at 8:48 AM

    *Sunstorm* "Mother chose me, beacause i'm a good tracker... found them! " He led the patrol over to the holly bush.

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  150. Frost LeapDecember 19, 2009 at 8:49 AM

    "they probabaly ran away with their kits. i think they had four."

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  151. JennaDecember 19, 2009 at 8:49 AM

    *Sunstorm* "Falcontail? What happened.. Adderpaw?" nods to the gray lump.

    *Falcontail* "I had to! He attacked the kits! "

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  152. Smoke CloudDecember 19, 2009 at 8:50 AM

    Smoke Cloud walked out from under the holly bush. "good job! but you are not getting near her nor my kits. ill rip your fur off if you do."

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  153. JennaDecember 19, 2009 at 8:53 AM

    *Crowkit* appears from behind the bush, and sits by his father. A golden head appeared a second later, and scooped him back in.

    *Falcontail* "Smokecloud.. don't hurt anyone.."

    *Thunderstar* "Goldenpaw? Are you in there? Are you okay? I want you and your kits to come back with us. I already accept you. My mother had me when she was a apprentice. I didn't want to tell anyone, but I think I needed to now."

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  154. Frost LeapDecember 19, 2009 at 8:53 AM

    Frost Leap went to the front of the group and meowed " Smoke CLoud Can i come in, not the others just me and maybe Thunder Star. we wont hurt your kits i swear on the name of Star Clan

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  155. Smoke CloudDecember 19, 2009 at 8:55 AM

    Smoke Cloud looked at his mate, and said "she will go back with you and discuss what will happen, im staying here with the kits just in case any one tries to hurt them."

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  156. JennaDecember 19, 2009 at 8:56 AM

    *Goldenheart* "Smokecloud! Cometkit's head is burning up!"

    *Thunderstar* "She cough have blackcough.. we need to get these kits back to camp Smokecloud! They could die out here!"

    *Goldenheart* "Please! Smokecloud! I wont go back without you and the kits with me!"

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  157. Smoke CloudDecember 19, 2009 at 8:57 AM

    he turned to his mate and meowed "you need the camp, you need help, you might be sick, ill be there with the kits if you dont come back in five minutes. i promise."

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  158. Smoke CloudDecember 19, 2009 at 8:58 AM

    "fine. but mean while, im gonna talk to frost leap. you gies go back. ill be there in a few."

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  159. JennaDecember 19, 2009 at 8:59 AM

    *Goldenheart* Fine, but let me take Cometkit. She looks sick. *picks up Cometkit, and follows the patrol away. She turns around, and gazes at Smokecloud.*

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  160. Smoke CloudDecember 19, 2009 at 9:00 AM

    leans down to crow kit and mud kit and meows "if anyone hurts you or your mom let me know. your the men of the family right now." their eyes gleamed with exitement at their fathers words.

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  161. Smoke CloudDecember 19, 2009 at 9:01 AM

    "dont worry its just frost leap. watches crow kit and mud kit and shine kit follow their mother in a clumsy way. smiles at golden heart

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  162. JennaDecember 19, 2009 at 9:02 AM

    *Shinekit* "What if Cometkit is sick!" *eyes stretch wide* " Will we get sick too!" *eyes stretch wider.*

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  163. JennaDecember 19, 2009 at 9:03 AM

    *Goldenheart* "No, sweetie. Just go find Rainstream, and rest with her. I'll be there soon."

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  164. Smoke CloudDecember 19, 2009 at 9:03 AM

    'turns to frost leap' "why did you let them find us? moms never gonna speak to me again, after what we did! we were not all that bad, i know that cat mint helps black cough andpoppy seeds for pain and maro gold for infection!i dont need the clan, but my family does."

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  165. JennaDecember 19, 2009 at 9:05 AM

    *Falcontail* appears, and calls, "You guys coming? Before pausing at the top of the slope, waiting for a reply."

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  166. Smoke CloudDecember 19, 2009 at 9:06 AM

    "you dont need it because your strong, so is your family, but you do need the clan, and i wanted you home, i miss fighting with my brothers, its not the same, we are the trio trouble pack anymore without you, and you showed that you were bold today, you basically said you would take us all on if we took a step in your holly bush den."

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  167. JennaDecember 19, 2009 at 9:08 AM

    *Falcontail* "Okay, i'll take that as a no..." before dashing away.

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  168. Smoke CloudDecember 19, 2009 at 9:08 AM

    frost leap meowed "yep." and ran up the slope to catch up. smoke cloud followed more slowly but then caught up to his mate and kits. he takes comit kit in his mouth so golden paw can rest for a bit.

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  169. JennaDecember 19, 2009 at 9:10 AM

    *Goldenheart* "Thanks. Lets go to the nursery."

    *go to the nursery*

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  170. Smoke CloudDecember 19, 2009 at 9:10 AM

    Crow kit ran up beside his father and said "my turn , my turn!" his father laughs through a heap of furr. but smoke cloud had to shake his head no.

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  171. Storm HeartDecember 30, 2009 at 2:20 PM

    *sniffs air* sees a plump vole, takes a flying leap, and lands beside it, and claws it to death.

    wolf kit

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  172. Storm HeartJanuary 3, 2010 at 8:34 AM

    *sniffs air, sees a squirrel, waits patiently for it to come closer. sees his chance sneaks out of the shadows and kills it swiftly* ok one down, a lot to go! *buries in dirt*

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  173. Storm HeartJanuary 3, 2010 at 8:36 AM

    *sniffs air once more. this time, mouse. he saw the creature about three fox lenghs away, he slithered through a bush, he pounced with strong hind legs, but landed lightly behind the creature. kills with a swipe of a paw* ok, a few more, and il come back. *buries with his other prey*

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  174. Storm HeartJanuary 3, 2010 at 8:46 AM

    Sees a crow, balances weight, pounces, lands on top of the creature, slices throght. buries with other prey.*


    *sniffs air once more, vole. sees the plump creature running around for food. pounces lightly, and perfectly, lands righ beside the vole, kills it swiftly and silently*

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  175. Storm HeartJanuary 3, 2010 at 8:50 AM

    *digs up prey takes back to camp, with a load.* ill come back and hunt more, but i need to check the borders, no thunder star will say who will do that, i guess. *keeps walking*

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  176. CookkiezJanuary 8, 2010 at 9:54 AM

    *tastes the air* "mouse", she meows softly. *tastes the air again* kits? *follows the scent of kits*

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  177. CookkiezJanuary 8, 2010 at 10:03 AM

    Kit: please help me, im lost.
    Me: what is your name?
    Kit: I am Fawnkit, my brother is Rowankit.
    Me: ok come with me ill take you to the nursury. but where is your mother?
    Fawnkit: she left us out here and i have been hunting fish for me and my brother *flicks tail at a pile of fish*
    Me: you would be a great warrior now follow me *walks toward the camp*
    Fawnkit: wake up Rowankit, we have a new home
    Rowankit: wha? oh ok im coming
    *both kits follow Dawnstorm*

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  178. Storm HeartJanuary 15, 2010 at 4:41 AM

    *pads out of the woods carrying a squirrel* kits?????? *eyes widen*

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  179. AnonymousApril 7, 2010 at 5:25 PM

    *runs out after a rabbit and swiftly kills it, then picks it up and buries it to get later. suddenly, she hears the rumbling of thunder. decides she won't go back to camp, at least until it starts raining. she sees a flash of lightning, and hears a creaking sound, but has no idea where it's coming from. a tree falls on her leg, and she yowls in pain, but the thunder drowns her out. then it started pouring. she lay there in terrible pain, yowling like crazy, even if no one could here her.*

    ~Mosshead

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